eugene
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Post by eugene on Dec 26, 2013 21:13:04 GMT 8
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Post by neosigma on Jan 20, 2014 15:26:47 GMT 8
Think I seen this a week ago if my memory serve me right....You really spend quite an effort in producing this dio, I really like the overall weaterhing on both the GM and the one with the gattling gun really caught my attention....
Only a few pointer
1) The greenery, its a bit too monotone, I saw your WIP have a few color variation for the green, should have use all to create different color of greeneries.
2) The exposed cables on the fallen GM is a bit too clean and new...might have to touch up abit
3) The separation of the armor (placement of plaplates) needs more references ....good try thou
Looking forward to see more kis from you , Good Luck for the compy and enjoy your hobby!!!
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eugene
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Post by eugene on Jan 23, 2014 19:26:00 GMT 8
Dear Neosigma, ya. the greenly thing is only monotone. when i try to add the lighter color it look kinder fake(cos the light green i have is like neo green. and other green i have the texture is bigger then the one i use)so i leave it like that, need to go buy some diorama materiel to made it more realism. thanks for the comment. i will keep it going XD
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Post by kennixon on Jan 23, 2014 19:42:26 GMT 8
Nice Diorama! I like the photoshop method you used!I shall try using your method too!
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Post by Phoon on Jan 24, 2014 8:28:00 GMT 8
Some comment solely on my personal reference as follow:- 1. Entire dio composition looks pretty decent except missing couples of details like irregular foliage and trees. Random natural colors would be an advantage. 2. Battle damage area ought to be pay more a little attention such as adding burnt marks to amputated torso, legs and etc. Bullet holes seems a little over done and too consistent which giving audience some doubtfulness. 3. Damage GM lying on the floor posture can be improvise further as the moment it's kinda stiff and unnatural. It's more like putting it on the dio base rather than a laying pose. 4. Drybrush need to be more subtle and it could give you a 'very rough finishing' results. Spotted some finger-prints too! Need to be more careful. All the above is just my nitpick and hope you don't mind for my direct criticism. On the bright side, you got alot of potential and room of improvement in your hardwork! Keep it up and hope to see your next diorama project.
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Post by Rayloke on Feb 7, 2014 15:35:22 GMT 8
Whoa! I like it very much! Especially your patience to make the brass rod into hollow. Probably the battle damage a lil too symmetrical. Other than that, I think this diorama is full of fun! hope to see more from you
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